Thriving Fire

This is a novel I've been working on for months now, and am still nowhere near finishing. Thought it would be worth putting this up just to see what happens... ...

Unfortunately, I've only read the first version of this because frankly I couldn't be bothered reading something twice and trying to spot the differences. Sorry, I know it makes me ...

Nan just stood there, in her slumped position against the door, her jaw dropped to somewhere beneath her chin. 'Close your mouth, you'll catch a Glitterybug' the creature said, 'Nasty ...

God I love this game. Granted, but then stereotypical fantasy wouldn't be a stereotype, and when another writer writes one, he or she would have fame, fortune and be considered ...

I screamed, and

Granted, but you get into different work that sucks even more. I wish my life was more exciting

A lot of people will call me a sappy git, but my favourite band of all time is Snow Patrol. I've loved their music since I heard 'Run' and they've ...

Much better... I can now feel your pain, your journey etc. etc. Albeit you didn't change the 'gusty' bit, which didn't make much sense but overall its better then it ...

7/10 to dream deep, coz I'm not sure I agree with you...

Granted, but it dosen't, so get over it. I wish I could be rich and famous without having to do anything

I liked the way the poem was one big metaphor for change. The metaphor is an important poetic device and I can see by this poem that you understand it ...

was killed instantly.

Granted, but you'd have to clean the school toilets instead. I wish my girlfriend was a supermodel

The door slammed shut and the darkness became complete. Nan could hear a click from the other side of the door. It was locked. Panicking, Nan groped around frantically, but ...

Thanks guys, and yeah, that first line just popped into my head and it stuck there. I loved it too, but then again, I am biased!